Guess who! its meeee wulan! yes, i know it’s so obvious from my website name right? And so lemme tell you, I was born on 9th of November 2002, and I’m 15 years old now yeay ! Great, so let’s move on. So I am gonna tell you a story about my boring life or I can say my daily life at school/home. okay lemme tell you about what happened lately with my normal life (well actually my life isn’t that interesting but i don’t care you know ).
So what happened lately was that i think my life are pretty bad its like my day are always been so up and down, and im just like not feeling myself like i dont like my mood, and i actually are a happy person and i dont really like to being sad all the time or feeling blue or whatever you can say that, and what i dont like is that i really dont want my friends to know that im not feeling well that day or that im not happy, well actually i dont even know why am i sad ( i mean i know but i dont know how to tell you guys ). So whats makes me happy right now or helping me to be happy right now are just music i mean cause i love music so much oh, oh yeah by the way my hobbies are listeing to music ( anykind of music with any kind of languange ), drawing and eat ( and this is why im chubby cause when im feeling down , i like or i crave something to eat ^U^ ). Cause im the kind of person who didint really like to talk about my life, so lets talk about something that i like and i dislike the most.
Firstly sorry cause my first blog aka this one are pretty random i can say but at least i tell you about myeself right? So yeah , what i like the most , i like animals ( i hate caterpillar soooo bad well im phobia of it , i like everything like i dont care abt spider etc something like that i just hate caterpillar so much ), i love foods any kind of food and im not a picky eater and i like to try some exotic food too, i like music any kind of music as i tell you in the above section but my favorite genre of music are hip – hop, indie, and k pop is that consider as a genre? , and ohh, i like to make people happy or give some postive vibe and i like to help a lot of people and i like to travel and make firends so i can get alot of experience, and what i dislike the most are something sad,crying infront of people ( cause its sound like im weak and idont like it ), fake people i mean i know this world are full of fake people but i just really hate them.
I think thats all that i can say from now, thanks for reading my very very random post 😉 so thats the end of my story from today ! thanks for reading !!
Wulan 11D 
weh u use informal slangs type of shi you I’m sayin?????????
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Wulan, your introductory is amazing! I’m sure you are a friendly girl just by reading this. I bet your friends are so grateful to have a friend like you, the one who always make them happy while you’re trying to hide that you’re sad or not feeling well.
Let’s get back to the topic. You described so much about yourself and what you have been up to recently. I get to know you better thanks to this piece of writing. Maybe, I am able to know you even more if you can tell me a bit about what you did in the past and your plan for the future or your dreams. It would be good if I can read your next posts with the grammar being improved and I believe you can do it. Overall, I really like it! ❤
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Hey, Hey, Wulan! First of all, can I just say how big of a fan I am for your posts? Because, even from this introduction post you deliver a really happy, fresh spirit to us as readers. Although that the backstory of your life is kind of blue, I really got motivated of how friendly your tone is from this writing. For me, you have consisted every content an introduction needs. You’ve included your hobbies, you described what kind of person you are. But I think it would be more interesting and hooking if you add on your childhood life and your future plans! It’s not necessary your autobiography, but at least insert some of your favorite memories! Bottom line, although there are a few grammar issues, the tone you bring really supports the post! Congratulations, Wul!
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Hi Wulan! Reading your introduction makes me feel excited in a way I don’t understand, I guess it’s because of your tone — I could see that you are a person with a lot of positive energy. After I read your introduction, I found lots of new facts about yourself, thus I am sure you have achieved the purpose of the text which is to inform and describe about yourself to the reader, although it would have been better if you had described more about your past or what you wish to happen in the future. Your writing style really depicts your personality, and I like it! I hope life is treating you well, because everyone needs someone like you in their life, someone who brings positivity to their surroundings. Love your work, Wul!
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Just starting out, and im getting a very personal and cheery vibes here. Not saying it’s bad, everyone has their own style to write. Font choice may need to be changed to make it more “Friendly” to the eyes, but overall, not bad. You might want to reduce the usage of Brackets though. Not that it’s a horrible thing, really, just the amount of brackets used could be reduced.
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Hai Wulan! I’m Nanda! I like your hook. I think this is very interesting. This is a very informative short introduction. You don’t need to add some details about yourself, because the reader can already imagine a strong character about you. But, in my opinion it becomes very interesting to read. You write as is. Explain based on how you really are. And that is certainly unique to me. I like where you show that you are happy to be you. I love it. Really, right, if we respect ourselves, it will make us better able to understand other people. Overall, I see that small mistakes are not a problem for me. This is an interesting way to start the blog opening. Of course for you. good work! I like it …
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great article. Reading it I felt like I could relate to it, which is very nice, being relatable, that is. You’ve definitely improved in your writing. I guess all those classes paid off. NEVER underestimate any subject being presented to you. As you’ve been through it, it’s important to learn that no one in this world knows everything, so keep an open mind and keep on learning. Keep up the good work, good luck on your studies!
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hi Wulan! sorry, ignore my previous comment I put here 😂 this one is my real comment. first of all, its okay to express your feelings, Wul. well, at least you can tell me, because I’m one of your closest friends, yay 🙂 your introductory essay is perfectly written! it really sets the mood to keep on scrolling and scrolling, because you deliver it in a very fresh way and interesting way (because you use informal words which makes it more fun to read) I’m sure everyone who comes across this introductory essay of yours will be interested to get to know you more. great job, Wul! I’m proud of you! don’t forgot to share stories if you’re not feeling well, I’ll be here for you:) keep up doing your amazing work!
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Hello Wulan it’s me again Rifqi so I’ve just read your introduction article. Your opening for your article is really hilarious i honestly grinning when i saw your opening in this article. I never get bored when i reading your article, you have a fun ways to make an article and your words in this article is really show that this is Wulan. Honestly Wulan your article is really touching me, because of your article I like about your personality more than before. You telling the things that are really exist in yourself and no one else have it. Most of the content of your introduction telling the uniqueness that you have in positive ways I have to say that I really got inspired by you. The point of your article is really great I believe a lot of people thought the same thing as I did without you know you inspiring a lot of people like me and your life that you told me can be a motivation for me and that’s really precious. I have a message for you Wulan , well you said that your life isn’t really interesting but don’t worry all people have an interesting life in their own ways you don’t need to follow the things that other people doing to make them feel happy, just be who you are and i bet you will feel that your life is really interesting if you found another side of your happiness and you will be happier. And overall thank you for your article.
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