Beinge in Ms. Y class, for the last 5/4 month of being in 11th grade was amazing and fun, and i’ve got some new experience. The topic that we have discussing about is directed writing, and there is 2 types of directed writing which is, same style different context & same material different prespective. The topic, at first, may seem to be just some simple analyzing, but when you understand about this topic and go deeper with the topic, you”ll starting to realize that this topic are pretty complex.
There are several things that we have to analyse on a task/text, and to determine the type of directed writing. There is a purpose of the text, the style of the text, the perspective/voice, the content, and finally the amount of words you are to write/has been written. The exercises given by Ms.Y was very challanging for me , but I managed to keep up and trying my best to understand the topic even more by asking some of my friends. But then i realize that this topic wasn’t that hard even though i still got the remedial.
And when we had our first class earlier in this semester, Ms.Y told us to make a wordpress account, and for me the task that she gave us are pretty easy and simple, the hardest part was when Ms.Y told us to made the account and that was the hardest task because some of my friend also hasn’t made the account yet and its pretty complex just only to make 1 account. And after this first task that she gave to us, the second task is that we have to made an Introduction for our blog aka this wordpress blog, and i’ve done it pretty fast because its kinda easy.
Mr.Griffin, he’s a great teacher, and he is a very friendly teacher, in his first class, he taught us about analogies, to be honest i dont really understand about this subject, i mean i understand but i dont know if i was right or wrong at that time. But Mr.Griffin still help me and teach me more so i understand how to do the exercise and the 2nd lesson with him, he teach and gave us another exercise that we needt to do, this exercise that he gave to us are from the cambridge text book that we need to read and describe.
Wulan 11D 
It’s me again, Wulan! This time, I’m reading your diary telling about what you have learned in English class during these 3 months. English class is challenging and it requires more energy to be able to focus on the lesson, isn’t it? But you still managed to keep up and try your best to understand the topic. Salute! I think you described and explained everything clearly here. I really enjoy reading your diary but it will be much better if you can describe a bit on the situation of your English class. Is it chaotic, full of excitement or even everyone seems sleepy? But don’t worry, you’re diary is cool! I am looking forward to your upcoming posts! Great Job!
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Hey it’s me again! Your diary really sticks to the purpose that Ms. Y asks which is to inform and describe what you have learned in English class to your readers. You explained every single thing you’ve learned in English class, including Mr. G’s class! It’s descriptive and informative! Maybe it would’ve been better if you have a hook to intrigue your readers. As your introduction state, you are a happy person, and I could really feel that in your writing. Unlike other’s diary that I have read, you didn’t take English class as a problem, or anything negative, you just let everything flow and enjoy your life. And that’s what I like about you, being positive! Anyway, I still found some typos in this diary, maybe after you read my comment you could fix that. Overall, nice work!
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Hi, Wulan! Good to be back on reading your post again. Your diary is very interesting to me. Other that explaining what you’ve learned on the past couple of months, you also added definition to everything that you’ve learned so far. That is very useful, how kind of you to add those! It gives knowledge to your readers themselves. Well, what can I say? You’ve included all contents that every diary would need. Your tone and style suits the idea of a diary article. That’s all I can say I guess, bottom line you did a very great job, see you on your next post!
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It’s categorized as a diary, and i shall review it as so. Pretty normal, standard things, nothing horrible regarding it, but nothing to captivate your audience to keep reading it aswell, so might want to work on that. That is, of course, if your plan is to make people read and not write a normal diary. And you most definitely want to change the colour of the font (not the title, title’s good). It’s contrasting so much it was hard for me to even read it, i had to highlight it all to be able to read normally. Fix that, and you’re good to go.
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Hi Wulan! it’s me again, Nanda. I like how you put amazing quotes on your hook. I think this is very interesting. It’s good to know that you can handle your difficulties in this class and you seem to be able to take part in class activities well. About your diary, I think it’s good and pretty much understood. You describe what you did in English class and I thought that was quite informative for me. I like you explaining your thoughts and perspectives about learning English. You also inform about what lessons you learned in this class. You might be able to add some more details about your feelings or maybe you struggle in learning or doing this activity. But it’s okay it’s not a problem at all. But honestly, overall I like it. Good work!
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great article. Reading it I felt like I could relate to it, which is very nice, being relatable, that is. You’ve definitely improved in your writing. I guess all those classes paid off. NEVER underestimate any subject being presented to you. As you’ve been through it, it’s important to learn that no one in this world knows everything, so keep an open mind and keep on learning. Keep up the good work, good luck on your studies!
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hi Wulan! its me again, Farrell! so I’ve just read your diary and its great! but unfortunately, you have a typo in the first word you typed, “beinge” is supposed to be “being”. I know its not a big problem and I know that you are aware that “beinge” is supposed to be “being” without an E in the end, so its not a big deal. overall, its a great diary! it really is informative and descriptive. you described every single detail about your difficulties, and to be honest, sometimes I feel the same way too! so, lets both work our best, and go with the flow. I look forward for your next posts!
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Hi Wulan how are you? It’s me Rifqi by the way, well i’ve already your article about your diary in El class, I think your article is very useful for a readers who search for an experience if they want to studying especially in EL class. In your article I also saw your orientation and i think your orientation is really good for the article, the way you introducing about your diary is really good for introduction part. I have to say your article is unique, you’re not just telling about general information in EL class like the subject and what you learned but also you told about specific things like how you studying, how you struggling in EL class, how well you know your teacher and many other things that shows you are really in EL class.Your article also really clean and I know exactly waht your point is. Overall thank you for your amazing article, I hope you can inspiring many readers like me with your article and don’t forget to learn more I also wishing the best luck for you Wulan.
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